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Tuesday 18 December 2018

A loyal beast (description)


Lucius Is my loyal beast very frightening at times. Lucius is mysterious inside and out curios of others, Lucius has wolf ears with a fluffy tail a body coloured black and grey with a moon symbol on the back of his head, four steady legs, with claws as sharp as metal. He smells amazing, he would attack if you are being suspicious or if someone hurts me. Lucius is loyal to only people who have helped him with a rough past and those he knows well enough that they won't betray him. Lucius lingers through the night without a sound he hides behind a tree to make sure he isn't noticed then creeps up on his prey with a surprise attack from behind. Lucius is loyal just make sure you get to know him before you try anything he hasn't seen before.


2 comments:

Ana @ Glen Innes School said...

Kia Ora Stars I like your fantastic work that you did. You described it and made more interesting. Your vocab is brilliant and it fits perfectly. What is your favourite activity at the moment?

Bye talk to you later.

Lee SLJ said...

Hi Nastazia, or can I call you Stars?

I really like how you've made your beast description into a detailed paragraph. Where did you come up with the name Lucius? It's got a great ring to it. He sounds temperamental, but very loyal. He almost reminds me of a wolf. Happy to know he smells amazing too.
Keep up the amazing blogging Stars!
- Lee

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